This was perfect, nonny. I love the way you blended the magical violation with the physical, and it's so perfect and so awful considering how Vanyel canonically does consider power-theft to be a kind of rape. And how Krebain starts off with the usual flatteries and then once he's fucking Vanyel he just calls him a slut -- perfect.
(The shackles and the hair-pulling are definitely bulletproof kinks of mine.... and they work so, so well here!)
I also reread the first two parts before reading the third, and they're even better on rereading. Thank you, nonny.
Re: 3/?
Date: 2015-08-19 01:42 am (UTC)This was perfect, nonny. I love the way you blended the magical violation with the physical, and it's so perfect and so awful considering how Vanyel canonically does consider power-theft to be a kind of rape. And how Krebain starts off with the usual flatteries and then once he's fucking Vanyel he just calls him a slut -- perfect.
(The shackles and the hair-pulling are definitely bulletproof kinks of mine.... and they work so, so well here!)
I also reread the first two parts before reading the third, and they're even better on rereading. Thank you, nonny.