Someone wrote in [community profile] 21_days 2015-10-20 01:46 pm (UTC)

Re: Ciel/Sebastian - Fake romance - FILL 1/?

This is pretty much everything I could have hoped from that prompt! I'm so excited that it's part of a longer piece!

What a revealing description, to have Ciel relaxing into the anonymity of his new role. He's such an introverted character that it absolutely makes sense for him to enjoy getting the chance to fade into the background for once, the way he usually can't because of his youth and position. That line about his being accustomed to Sebastian's touch was also great. I love how easily they are falling into their new roles.

I also love that Sebastian is settling into this new role as perfectly as he does everything else. The few hints of their changed dynamics have been fascinating. Sebastian using Ciel's given name is one of my favorite things ever! And how hilarious that Ciel, of all people, thought Sebastian's clothes were melodramatic! Does he even pay attention to how Sebastian dresses him every day? :D

And that ending! Please don't leave us hanging, anon author! I can't wait to see where this goes! :D

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