Nonny I’m SO STOKED HOLY SHIT, I hadn’t even hoped that you were talking about one of my prompts! (The Josephine/Sera one was mine, though TBH I have been eyeing the rivals one too) This is definitely my lucky night :D
I love how you started out placing Josephine in context with her sister and other nobles. She’s constantly observing and taking notes, it’s very true to character.
I’m super duper impressed with how well you wrote Sera’s dialogue! Seriously, many many kudos, she sounds perfect. And then I adore your portrayal of their interaction! I wish we’d gotten so much more of them together in the game, but you’ve really drawn well from what we did get.
And I am dying at the last part where Sera jumps. 10/10 would laugh out loud again.
CANNOT wait for the next part :D I mean, I will wait, obviously, but I’m so excited to see where this goes :)
Re: FILL: Josephine/Sera, Part 1/??, post-Trespasser
I love how you started out placing Josephine in context with her sister and other nobles. She’s constantly observing and taking notes, it’s very true to character.
I’m super duper impressed with how well you wrote Sera’s dialogue! Seriously, many many kudos, she sounds perfect. And then I adore your portrayal of their interaction! I wish we’d gotten so much more of them together in the game, but you’ve really drawn well from what we did get.
And I am dying at the last part where Sera jumps. 10/10 would laugh out loud again.
CANNOT wait for the next part :D I mean, I will wait, obviously, but I’m so excited to see where this goes :)