Thanks so much for taking this on - this is an awesome beginning! The intro section is so so good - Van's desolation is palpable. And his bitterness later, so much so that he's sassing a Herald - a cute Herald... Can't wait to find out why they were roomed together. Please keep going!
Re: FILL: Tylendel/Vanyel - Orders - 1/?
Thanks so much for taking this on - this is an awesome beginning! The intro section is so so good - Van's desolation is palpable. And his bitterness later, so much so that he's sassing a Herald - a cute Herald... Can't wait to find out why they were roomed together. Please keep going!