Someone wrote in [community profile] 21_days 2015-08-29 11:58 pm (UTC)

Re: The Lost One 8/9

OP

I started quoting lines from this that made my heart sing with joy, but then realized I was just copy-pasting literally the entire thing.

You’ve blended the intimacy and eroticism and exploration and emotion and the memory of pain so well, A!A. This is fucking beautiful.

Omg and Vanyel asking for pain asfgjdkh;lkjtdljhhdlkh. What a dilemma for poor Stefen… “Okay time to teach the former abused sex slave about SSC in about 20 seconds” But you actually write it super believably and what a relief that is for me because this like catnip to me, nonny. Healing cock is all well and good but D/s healing cock is one thousand times better :D :D

Ahhh and he’s playing an instrument again in a very different and yet more excellent way :D You’ve written an amazingly cohesive story considering it’s a serial-posted kink meme fill, tbh. Major massive kudos.

Annnd holy shit the spanking scene was hot. Love how you wrote Stef’s dialogue in it. And Vanyel blushing - he’s been through so much, done so much, but this is new. And he still asks permission to cum ;___; So many heartbreaking details in the porn, I love it.

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