Someone wrote in [community profile] 21_days 2015-08-26 04:34 am (UTC)

Re: FILL: Tylendel/Vanyel - Orders - 10/10 (END)

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OMG OMG OMG that was such a sweet ending. I love how the hair-cutting scene sparked that physical trust/intimacy between them. And then the sex was so caring and tender, but also came across as being two stupidly in love teenagers, with the calling each other amazing and Van's ignorance of practicalities? aaah it's so sweet. And then Van gets up the courage to take his music back...that was such a sweet way to end it. Thanks so much for taking on this prompt, anon.

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