Someone wrote in [community profile] 21_days 2015-08-23 07:20 pm (UTC)

Re: FILL: Tylendel/Vanyel - Orders - 4/?

Ooh, things are picking up! Just read parts 3 and 4 together, and your pacing is great. The whole thing is lovely, but I loved this line especially:

A face Vanyel had finally been able to find beautiful, after so many years of looking at the wrong faces and not being able to feel anything at all.

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