Someone wrote in [community profile] 21_days 2015-08-23 01:36 am (UTC)

Re: FILL: Tylendel/Vanyel - Orders - 2/?

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Oh wow, Lendel would have to bring up Bards... Van's reaction is so heartbreaking ;__; Much woob. I liked the part where Lendel recognised that he could have been in the same position - that passage was a touching character moment. ahahaha MAYBE THE CELIBACY indeed

I also love that you brought in the idea that Heralds are sinful and licentious! It had slipped my mind that that was a thing, but wow, it's so relevant here. I wonder if Van believes that and if it's affecting his behaviour at all. Lendel is tempting him away from his vows & his stable, empty little monastery world, into a life of chaos and sin, lol.

basically I love how you're developing the ship, via avoidance and introspection and increasing tension (where do people vanish to???) Thanks so much for this fill!

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