Oh, clever! I like the canon changes you're making here, and I can see how they'll work. Stef getting the kyree involved in the final battle, and Yfandes realizing the message can be sent much earlier, are both really important pivot points. But even before that, the first pivot you've written is Vanyel admitting to Stef that he expects to die, giving Stefen the chance to plan alternatives. Well done, A!A.