Oh, well done! You've got the connection between Lavan and Kalira, and you've written a story in which their actual body types... are part of the story, but don't matter so much. It's a convincing take on what a lifebond between a human and a sentient horse could look like, and it's just creepy enough to work for poor messed-up Lavan and Kalira.
Re: FILL: "Beloved" - Lavan/Kalira, mind-linked masturbation
Oh, well done! You've got the connection between Lavan and Kalira, and you've written a story in which their actual body types... are part of the story, but don't matter so much. It's a convincing take on what a lifebond between a human and a sentient horse could look like, and it's just creepy enough to work for poor messed-up Lavan and Kalira.